五、Rose Betts为电影原创的翠星主题歌曲《The Land We Breath》悠扬动人,我觉定自己重译歌词。翻译思路:
1、个人意趣,将歌词押韵,并且尽量保持音节一致;
2、结合叛月作为太空战争电影的背景与歌词上下文,决定把"gloaming skies"译作”硝烟“。根据上文"I follow your feet",我认为下文的"hold"是”停步“之义,而官方译作”拥抱“。至于"My heart, my home",我当时脑里第一时间蹦出来的就是”吾心归处“,个人觉得不错,遂采用。
Title:Rebel Moon - Part One: A Child of Fire Year:2023 Rated:PG-13 Genre:Action / Adventure / Drama Language:English Country:United States Director:Zack Snyder Writer:Zack Snyder / Kurt Johnstad / Shay Hatten Actors:Sofia Boutella / Djimon Hounsou / Ed Skrein Plot:When a peaceful settlement on the edge of a distant moon finds itself threatened by a tyrannical ruling force, a stranger living among its villagers becomes their best hope for survival.